Need to improve for magazine:
- Heavier/bolder font for masthead
- Main strap line needs to be larger
- Remove dash from quoted name
- Reduce size of name under quote slightly
- Reduce size of "full story pages 20 - 21!" more than named quote
- less/smaller strap lines?
- Use icons
- Avoid contact with face with "Love triangle..." strap line
Need to improve for double page spread:
- Rewording, alliteration?
- Spell check vengeance bottom corners
- Change edited by to "Written By"
- Word wrap better on the right size lower section of main image
- Reposition main red quotes to be lower in article
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